Questions keep popping up on the mailring lately about the
Writing Block of the 4-Blocks Model. So, this week's column will focus
on aspects of that block that may help to make implementation smoother.
Let's see what folks are asking...
How much time is needed for the Writing Block?
Each of the four blocks of this model needs a minimum
of 30 minutes daily. Writing Block will take approximately 30-40 minutes
daily. You're likely to find that the more confident your students become
as writers, the more time you're likely to need. Don't, however, extend
beyond this time. Your students need to know that it's okay not to finish
a composition in one sitting. They need to learn to return to the same
composition the next day to extend that piece of writing.
How do you get students who haven't had many writing
experiences to write for sustained amounts of time?
In the very beginning, especially when students haven't
had the frequent opportunities to write, you will need to start with smaller
amounts of sustained writing time. For example, after you model your lesson,
you'll set a timer for 10 minutes of writing time for the students. At
the end of those ten minutes (which, of course, in the beginning will seem
like a long time for kids who don't see themselves as writers), tell the
kids they have three choices for the next 5 minutes:
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keep writing if they'd like to finish something
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stop and share what they've written with a friend
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stop and illustrate what they've written
Students enjoy the options and the responsibility that comes
with choices. As time goes by, you'll find more and more students choosing
the option of continuing with what they're writing.
What are the basic components of the Writing Block?
This block is similar to a Writers' Workshop approach
to writing. There are three segments that should be included in each daily
block of approximately 30-40 minutes. First, the teacher will model his/her
own writing for the students, including a quick edit (using the Editor's
Checklist) and a mini-lesson on some writing skill or strategy. This first
segment usually takes approximately 10 minutes. Second, the students will
write at their desks at whatever stage of the writing process they choose.
Some will be starting a first draft; some will be continuing a piece from
the day before; some will be meeting individually with the teacher for
a final edit before publishing; and some will be publishing and illustrating
their pieces. The students will write for about 20 minutes when they are
comfortable with the task of writing. The third segment of the block--one
that unfortunately gets omitted in many classrooms--is the sharing time,
which takes about 5 - 10 minutes. That's when a couple of students get
to share in the Author's Chair what they have written. There are also variations
of ways that the class members can share with one another.
What's the best way for teachers to model their
own writing?
Teachers should sit at an overhead projector, closely
simulating how students will sit at their desks to write, and write their
compositions on a lined transparency. Using lined transparencies similar
to whatever type of paper the students are using is best! That can be achieved
by copying the paper, whether half-and-half or regular lined or first grade,
in your copy machine and onto a transparency. For those teachers who have
color printers, you may reproduce a nice color transparency with the blue
and red exactly like that used by the students. The closer your model can
simulate the student's position, paper, etc., the more effective your model
is likely to be. That's the reason, too, for using the overhead while sitting
in a chair and facing the students, rather than standing at the blackboard
with your back to the children.
Teachers should not try to create models of writing that
are so exemplary that students feel they can never achieve what the teacher
is writing. Teachers should write about ordinary things. One main intent
should be to show students who are emergent writers that writing is telling--and
that everyone has something to tell. Students will love best
your stories about your real life--your baby's first experience eating pudding,
your dog's antics, your husband's or wife's pet peeves, what you did when
you were their age, etc. This is a chance to share some of yourself with
your children and for you to set them at ease about writing.
What else do I need to know about the modeling process?
Talking and thinking out loud as you write are absolutely
critical! What you think out loud and how you share that thought process
are just as important as what actually goes on the paper. Many kids have
no idea how to make the choices that a writer makes as he navigates the
page. You must help them understand how to do that, starting with how to
choose a topic to write about--"Now what do I want to tell you about today?
Let me see... I could tell you about how my car wouldn't start when I left
school yesterday...or I could tell about my husband's birthday party that
we celebrated last weekend...or I could tell you about my cat's trip to the
vet on Monday. Yes! That would be a funny story to tell about!"
You will want to model the use of the many resources that
you have available for them in your classroom, especially the Word Wall
and any theme or topic charts you might have hanging. "Oh, I can spell
‘because' correctly since it's on the Word Wall." "The word ‘orange' is
right there on our chart of colors, so I can spell it correctly." You should
always expect them to spell the Word Wall words correctly, even on their
rough drafts. That's the purpose of having it visible at all times and
of spending so much time working with those high-frequency words daily.
At some time, you need to model what to do if you have
"writer's block," since we all get that occasionally. Give the students
some strategies for finding ideas to write about when they're stuck. One
morning you'll say something like, "Gosh, boys and girls! I just can't
seem to think what I want to tell you today. Maybe if I look around the
room at the pictures, or if I look outside and describe what I see, or
if I look in my journal at the idea brainstorm list that we've made...".
They'll soon catch on about what they can do when this happens.
Talk as you continue to write, making decisions about
what the title will be and how to decide that, where you'll start writing
on the paper, how to "stretch-out" words that you don't know how to spell,
and where to put punctuation. Let the students know that rough drafts don't
have to be perfect. You'll do a quick editing job (using the Editor's Checklist)
at the end of the piece, just enough to make it more readable. Let them
know that there will be a more thorough editing if that piece is selected
to publish.
What kinds of mini-lessons should be included in
the modeling?
Some of the first mini-lessons you'll want to include
in your modeled writing will be the basics that will go on your Editor's
Checklist. Most of those items will be the conventions of writing--simple
grammar and mechanics: capitals letters at the beginnings of sentences,
end punctuation marks for each sentence, a title, misspelled words circled,
etc. Teachers should always strive, however, to move beyond simple conventions
to teaching more about compositional elements. A list of mini-lessons used
by teachers with whom I work is given below for your reference:
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Actual class procedures for the Writing Block.
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Rules for the Writing Block made by the teacher and the students.
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Words that author's use such as draft, publish, illustrate,
revise, edit, proof, dedication, etc. (Introduce only one a day.)
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Correct conventions of grammar and usage (parts of speech,
subject/verb agreement, etc.).
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When to use capital letters.
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Punctuation marks and how they're used.
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How to set a scene (setting).
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How to combine sentences for sentence variety.
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How to develop ideas.
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Different genres of writing (fiction, non-fiction, poetry,
mysteries, fables...).
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How writing can have a particular voice.
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Examples of good writing and styles of various authors.
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How to add to a story.
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How to change a story.
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Using synonyms to make writing more interesting.
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Creating an interesting lead sentence.
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Staying on a topic.
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How to write a letter.
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How to take notes.
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How to write up an interview.
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Making a brainstorm list.
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Writing riddles, jokes and rhymes.
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Writing news articles.
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Using student writing as a model (Be careful to use only
students' good examples in the class or they may hesitate to share.)
What kinds of topics should I assign students during
the Writing Block?
This is the really great part--YOU DON'T ASSIGN THE WRITING!!!
You will teach your students that they have many things to tell about from
their everyday lives. You'll be modeling daily that it's the everyday things
you want to hear about. You'll sometimes model writing different genres--stories,
"how-to" expository pieces, directions on how to get somewhere in the school,
a thank-you note to the cafeteria workers, and many, many more types of
writing. Occasionally you may need to guide them through a piece of focused
writing, a piece of research or a letter; however, you will need to trust
that students will write best about what interests them most. Set a risk-taking
environment and allow them to build their confidence. Just because you're
not assigning all the topics and not guiding them through all the stages,
doesn't mean you're not "in control" of the classroom.
There's still so much to talk about for the Writing Block:
How do I get started with the Editor's Checklist? What goes on an Editor's
Checklist? What do I do during the individual conferences with students?
How and when should we publish our work? What different ways can we share
our writing? When is it appropriate to have the kids peer-edit their work?
BUT, THERE'S ALWAYS NEXT WEEK!