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Hi, I am looking to find advice on my thesis statement for my research paper. This is the statement: The Roswell Incident is one of the most infamous accounts of extraterrestrials in America’s vast history. It became the biggest case because of government attempts hide the evidence, keep witnesses quiet, and deter people from the truth. I was wondering if it is good and maybe get advice on how to improve it if there is something wrong. Thanks.
Kathy The first thing that caught my eye is infamous. Infamous means famous for doing bad things. Vast is distance. The Grand Canyon is vast. How long is the paper? What grade?

On 2/15/16, Cate wrote: > Hi, I am looking to find advice on my thesis statement > for my research paper. > This is the statement: > The Roswell Incident is o...See More
Feb 15, 2016


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