First I'll say that grading essays is fairly arbitrary. I once
gave out a paper to all my colleagues and asked them to grade
it. The very same paper got grades ranging from an A to a D...
and that's a true story.
There's an old saying that goes 'one man's treasure is another
man's junk' and that applies to essays too. Some people think
Hemingway is an amazing writer and I don't. I dislike
Hemingway though I admire his sentence structure and his
ability to hold us spellbound with his sentences but I HATE
the way he treats women in his works. There is simple no
agreement as to what is good writing and there are so many
different ways to analyze a piece of literature and so many
different ways in which to write.
All that said, if you want to send your essay - preferably not
as an attachment but right in the body of an e-mail, you could
send it to this e-mail - firstname.lastname@example.org - and I'd try to
read it for you and give an opinion.
I think that's an active e-mail address though it's an old one
I don't use it often.
> I'd really appreciate a help from English teacher. I have
> an essay (10th grade, English classs, AP) and I'd like to
> know how would you grade it. What is good and what is bad
> about it.
> I do not want tell the whole story why do I need it because
> I do not want to influence your judjement in any way.
> Also, I do not want to post it right here. If you can help
> me, please, send me an email at email@example.com and
> I'll reply with essay attached (msword docx file).
> Thanks in advance. Eugene-