On 11/11/09, sav teach wrote:
> On 11/10/09, Dan wrote:
>> I stumbled across this thread by accident. I couldn't stop
>> reading!! I couldn't believe how illogical most posts
>> were, and the grammatical and spelling errors committed
>> by...teachers! Very sad. Good luck keeping that NB money
>> though. That's the important thing, right.
>
> First, why all the ! marks, totally unnecessary.
> Second, you have fragmented sentences in your paragraph.
> Third, Use of too many 's in your paragraph with poor word
> choices. Using the word "couldn't" twice especially one right
> after another is not good.
> Fourth, the three dots...unnecessary, even for dramatic effect.
> Use a comma instead.
> Fifth, the abbreviation NB for what? Do not assume your reader
> knows what NB means unless you have already stated it somewhere
> else.
> Sixth, You finished your paragraph with a question, and no
> question mark. Bad form.
>
> See anyone can be a$$.

But only some can excel at it.

I have written a fragment on purpose, but I have written it in a
union state!! Bwahahahahaaaaaaa!! I left SC for many
teaching-related issues, but the notion that someone could so
bitterly stab in a strange attempt at defending the crap that
passes for an education system boggles my mind. I won't even
bother to comment upon the numbered grammatical disaster above.
I'm too insanely happy to have my kids back in a real school.

So long, SC!!

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