Sentence fluency=shoe lace licorice....long flowing, smooth Word choice = pickles, great variety and flavours, beet, dill, onion, garlic, OR is would Jelly Bellies be a better example of the great variety and floavours of words?? Organization is like crackers and cheeze with an olive on top........specific ways to serve.
Alison/AusI'm a complete newbie when it comes to this, but what is 6 traits? It's not a term I've heard used here in Australia, but then I'm a music teacher, so it may well be out there. Your lists of the foods strikes a chord with me, and for me, the separate ones are best because I'm still sorting out the 'ingredients'.
On 2/08/09, michael wrote: > Interesting idea... should you be looking for a "complete > dish" that the traits create? Lasagna? long flowing smooth > noodles organized into layers with some small, spicy > meatballs added into the sauce, etc. Shoot, now I'm hungry > for some Italian food! > > On 1/18/09, L. Trying wrote: >> I'm just playing with the idea that each trait might be >> equated to a food. >> >> Sentence fluency=shoe lace licorice....long flowing, smooth >> Word choice = pickles, great variety and flavours, beet, >> dill, onion, garlic, OR is would Jelly Bellies be a >> better example of the great variety and floavours of >> words?? >> Organization is like crackers and cheeze with an olive on >> top........specific ways to serve. >> >> Any other thoughts out there???
I am leading a grading session of papers using the Primary 6-Traits. Should we use samples that the students write in one day, or something that they have written for a few days?
Does anyone know where I could get master copies of forms to use for scoring writing for each of the traits? I don't want to make my own if there are already some out there somewhere.
Thanks for your help!
Also, any great ideas for R.A.F.T.S that have worked well for you? My kids love them!
I teach 7th/8th grade Englis...See MoreIs there a way to get official training for the 6 Traits Writing? Is there some sort of program to go through or workshops to take? I'm trying to get going on it but I'm on my own just using the book. I have no idea if they go around presenting workshops or official training on it. Any info appreciated. Thanks!
On top ...See MoreI'm working on revising the curriculum for 9th grade at a school in a large urban district. Our test scores show us to be low-performing. Demographically, we are poor and transient.
Most English students have either tested out of ELD or are the children of parents who don't speak English; few are native English speakers.
On top of that, this year I began teaching in a special program for students who would have been retained in 8th grade, but the District has decided to socially promote them to high school to cut costs and improve test scores at the junior high level.
Assigning homework is usually an exercise in failure. Because of this, my lessons never rely on homework having been done. I reserve HW for enrichment and deepening student knowledge.
I know that students, in theory, should find a process piece highly relevant since they select the topic and be driven to complete it when it's assigned in conjunction with mini-lessons that teach them how to write. Unfortunately, in the past, process pieces -- if completed -- have not been strong evidence of the topic's relevance to the student who chose it or the skills presented and demonstrated in mini-lessons.
As you can imagine, I am trying to instill a sense of success in students who have rarely experienced any academically so that when they move out of this program in the 10th grade (assuming they're successful) they will want to work for that same success. For this reason, I hesitate to assign anything major without allowing significant in-class time to work on it.
This can seriously limit the amount of other information I am able to present to them, as virtually everything we do must be done during the class period. (We have a block schedule wherein I see the kids 3X a week; 40 minutes on Monday, 89 minutes 2x week.)
Currently, we are expected to complete 4 major process pieces per year - autobiographical, analytical, informative, and persuasive.
What would you prescribe in this situation?
I thank you in advance, esteemed colleagues, for any recommendations you have.
AdamI thank you in advance, esteemed colleagues, for any > recommendations you have.
Take a look at paragraphpunch.com and essaypunch.com. These are interactive writing programs that guide students step-by- step through the process of writing online.
Good luck!!
<...See MoreAllowing students to add pieces of writing to their portfolios makes the collection more meaningful to the students. A selection of required pieces should be added, but try to focus on the process as well as the result. Perhaps their could be some type of presentation of the portfolios that the students could prepare for...
Good luck!!
On 5/28/09, Bill wrote: > On 5/26/09, Lauren wrote: >> How are writing folders used in your schools. Right now, >> writing samples are collected throughout the year..2 or 3 >> are then selected to move with the folder to the next >> grade level, along with a student reflection about the >> chosen pieces...but the pieces/reflection are rarely >> looked at the next year!! Looking to revamp the process, >> which would include a better student self evaluation form. >> Any suggestions? > > Unfortunatyely, the folders are just a respositoritory for > writing assignments, kind of a blackhole of assignments past.
Keep in mind, I have been telling them it is ok not to grade every paper... and you don't have to grade the whole paper...example --if the class is weak on introductions, assess a writing piece only on the introduction. I am also trying to work in the 6 traits into the workshop...which would help them focus on one or two areas at a time.
Anybody have any suggestions on how to implement Writer's Workshop during our 74 minute block, while not taking away from reading instruction...or adding to the writing instruction?
DrDebLauren- Once =the teachers understand that the writing workshop is really a "system to use" for the writing they already do, they may use it. Writer's Workshop is not more writing, it makes the writing time meaningful for the individual students. As will the 6 Traits of Writing. The student writing already contains the traits - use some of their ow...See MoreLauren- Once =the teachers understand that the writing workshop is really a "system to use" for the writing they already do, they may use it. Writer's Workshop is not more writing, it makes the writing time meaningful for the individual students. As will the 6 Traits of Writing. The student writing already contains the traits - use some of their own student samples to point this out. Use a student writing to find the "idea" - if you are already using a rubric GREAT, use that rubric.Then they may recognize by focusing on 2 or 3 traits at a time, their student writing will improve. I would reccomend the book Creating Writiers by Vicki Spandel. On 5/26/09, Lauren wrote: > My teachers are reluctant so far for several > reasons....they think it will be writing in addition to the > writing that accompanies the selections from the Literature > book or novels being read; they are used to giving students > prompts to respond to, instead of letting students choose -- > meaning you could have several different topics being > written about; and finally, "you want them to write > everyday?? -- who is grading all of that work!!??" > > Keep in mind, I have been telling them it is ok not to > grade every paper... and you don't have to grade the whole > paper...example --if the class is weak on introductions, > assess a writing piece only on the introduction. > I am also trying to work in the 6 traits into the > workshop...which would help them focus on one or two areas > at a time. > > Anybody have any suggestions on how to implement Writer's > Workshop during our 74 minute block, while not taking away > from reading instruction...or adding to the writing > instruction? > > Lauren
This was the first year we used the 6+1 Writing Traits in our Language Arts program. Although we attended an in-service on the topic, I'm still a little lost.
Can anyone describe - or attach a link or recommend a book that explains - how to model the traits in a writing lesson?
SarahI'm in a similar situation. The book 6+1 Traits of Writing by Ruth Culham is extremely helpful and has lots of practical ideas about how to teach and model the traits. There are numerous mini-lessons that the kids will actually enjoy.
This lists we...See MoreRazzle Dazzle Writing, Writing Whizardry, The Writing Menu, and Dynamite Writing Ideas are a few books that have creative and engaging lessons for students regarding the 6+1 Traits.
As for websites...
This one has a lot of good resources and Writer's Workshop materials based on the 6+1 Traits [link removed]
This lists websites you can look to for more writing help, including 6+1 Traits... [link removed]
Actual Lesson Plans for each Trait can be found here:[link removed]
I stumbled across this website and found some really cool tools to use in class... Like the Ideas Song (to the tune of She'll be Coming Round the Mountain!) There is so much here, you really need to see it for yourself! Kudos to the Northern Nevada Writing Workshop!
On 6/19/09, Katie wrote: > Thank you for posting that! That is a great resource. There > are so many fun activities you can do with 6+1. I will > definitely use that website. There are some books that I > already have that there are lessons for. :-
On 6/19/09, EllenG59 wrote: > I stumbled across this website and found some really cool > tools to use in class... Like the Ideas Song (to the tune > of She'll be Coming Round the Mountain!) There is so much > here, you really need to see it for yourself! Kudos to the > Northern Nevada Writing Workshop!