In science class I have students use creative writng to help them understand the science facts we are working on such as pretending to be a read blood cell as it moves through the parts of the circulatory system.
In this they can tell the inventors how much their invention had improved/changed society.
The ones to living inventors were mailed to them, after we researched their addresses.
On 6/11/11, Margaret Dacko wrote: > In science class I have students use creative writng to > help them understand the science facts we are working on > such as pretending to be a read blood cell as it moves > through the parts of the circulatory system.
I don't know what age your students are but they are very fortunate to have such a great teacher! I love the idea of having students write up a story about a red blood cell moving through the body.
Have you ever watched an old film with Raquel Welch called Fantastic Voyage? You can find it or clips from it on youtube - it's about a group of scientists who shrink themselves and then travel through the human body like a small red blood cell. Your kids would love it.
On 6/11/11, VET wrote: > What a wonderful true story, Babs! Thank you. > > You were so thoughtful to tell this special teacher how much > she had positively influenced your son. The best part is that > you told her several times over the years. > > I'll bet you made her day more than once. Sounds like she was > a special teacher. > > On 6/11/11, Babs wrote: >> Many years ago when my son was in 3rd grade he was >> fortunate enough to have a teacher who had taken a creative >> writing workshop during the summer and was anxious to use >> her new found teaching techniques with her class. My son, >> who had always had an active imagination and a love of >> words was absolutely entranced. He loved the activities and >> instruction that she provided. With that introduction he >> continued to love to write throughout his school >> years....even becoming the editor of his high school >> newspaper. Now he is 34, married, (met her when they were >> both reporters on a local daily paper) and just left a job >> as an editor of a McGraw Hill magazine in NYC in order to >> move to Europe where he and his wife are both >> writing/editing for a newspaper there. He turned his >> passion for writing into a very nice career doing something >> he loves. So, all you who teach writing, keep up the good >> work. His 3rd grade teacher recently died of cancer and I >> used every rare chance I had over the years to thank her >> and to tell her what a positive influence she had been on >> my son.
On 6/11/11, VET wrote: > What a wonderful true story, Babs! Thank you. > > You were so thoughtful to tell this special teacher how much > she had positively influenced your son. The best part is that > you told her several times over the years. > > I'll bet you made her day more than once. Sounds like she was > a special teacher. > > On 6/11/11, Babs wrote: >> Many years ago when my son was in 3rd grade he was >> fortunate enough to have a teacher who had taken a creative >> writing workshop during the summer and was anxious to use >> her new found teaching techniques with her class. My son, >> who had always had an active imagination and a love of >> words was absolutely entranced. He loved the activities and >> instruction that she provided. With that introduction he >> continued to love to write throughout his school >> years....even becoming the editor of his high school >> newspaper. Now he is 34, married, (met her when they were >> both reporters on a local daily paper) and just left a job >> as an editor of a McGraw Hill magazine in NYC in order to >> move to Europe where he and his wife are both >> writing/editing for a newspaper there. He turned his >> passion for writing into a very nice career doing something >> he loves. So, all you who teach writing, keep up the good >> work. His 3rd grade teacher recently died of cancer and I >> used every rare chance I had over the years to thank her >> and to tell her what a positive influence she had been on >> my son.
On 6/11/11, Amanda wrote: > On 6/11/11, disney cathy wrote: >> A college class had to write a short story in as few words >> as possible. The story had to include religion,mystery,and >> sexuality. >> >> Only one student received an A plus: >> Good God,(religion), I'm pregnant,(sexuality), I wonder who >> did it. (mystery) > > > LOL, that's a new one on me!
wigOn 6/11/11, disney cathy wrote: > A college class had to write a short story in as few words > as possible. The story had to include religion,mystery,and > sexuality. > > Only one student received an A plus: > Good God,(religion), I'm pregnant,(sexuality), I wonder who > did it. (mystery)
Ariel in the Night KitchenYour classroom writing center sounds great. I especially like the Illustrator's Center and the idea of adding the students to the gallery as they complete work. Sounds like a wonderful environment. I'd love to see pictures.
I am also the 2-3 EL teacher, and have been trying to get that little group up to par on their writing.
Spending lots of time thinking about my writing program and the results. Not a lot of success, and lots of frustration on my part.
I realized, I don't think my kids really understand Topic sentences and Conclusion sentences, and how they relate. They are amazing on details, but the organization and form of a paragraph just wasn't being demonstrated.
I am so pleased with the results. I still have students who aren't indenting, or are indenting the whole paragraph, but it is just a few. Many of my students are taking the format and doing multiparagraph writing and I am just happy.
Ralph Fletcher said if you don't teach writing daily, you might as well not teach writing. I am seeing the results of this. My students are not only writing better mechanically, their content is improving.
I am always disappointed when I teach writing. I feel that they should know how to do specific things before they come to 9th grade (use a dictionary, write a complete sentence, use their/there correcctly, indent a paragraph, topic sentence, unity, coherency). I realize that this is my problem and I need to adjust my teaching to the reality and I do, but it is still disappointing that kids can't write a complete sentence or use it's / its correctly. I know they were taught the skills earlier than 9th.
ok. no more complaining. :)
On 6/11/11, paula wrote: > I have taught writing for years and years. I have used many > different methods and ideas, and this year, nothing was > really working for my guys. > > I am also the 2-3 EL teacher, and have been trying to get > that little group up to par on their writing. > > Spending lots of time thinking about my writing program and > the results. Not a lot of success, and lots of frustration > on my part. > > I realized, I don't think my kids really understand Topic > sentences and Conclusion sentences, and how they relate. > They are amazing on details, but the organization and form > of a paragraph just wasn't being demonstrated. > > I am so pleased with the results. I still have students who > aren't indenting, or are indenting the whole paragraph, but > it is just a few. Many of my students are taking the format > and doing multiparagraph writing and I am just happy. > > Ralph Fletcher said if you don't teach writing daily, you > might as well not teach writing. I am seeing the results of > this. My students are not only writing better mechanically, > their content is improving. >
maryI am not a good writer myself and found this to be hard for me to teach. Now, mechanics was not a problem for me to teach but be creative was where I had a problem. I found it hard to help students with ideals for their writing. Now I could take a simple sentence and turn it into a complex sentence but coming up with 5 paragraphs was not always eas...See MoreI am not a good writer myself and found this to be hard for me to teach. Now, mechanics was not a problem for me to teach but be creative was where I had a problem. I found it hard to help students with ideals for their writing. Now I could take a simple sentence and turn it into a complex sentence but coming up with 5 paragraphs was not always easy especially with a group of students who couldn't hardly write or come up with their own ideals. On 6/11/11, paula wrote: > I have taught writing for years and years. I have used many > different methods and ideas, and this year, nothing was > really working for my guys. > > I am also the 2-3 EL teacher, and have been trying to get > that little group up to par on their writing. > > Spending lots of time thinking about my writing program and > the results. Not a lot of success, and lots of frustration > on my part. > > I realized, I don't think my kids really understand Topic > sentences and Conclusion sentences, and how they relate. > They are amazing on details, but the organization and form > of a paragraph just wasn't being demonstrated. > > I am so pleased with the results. I still have students who > aren't indenting, or are indenting the whole paragraph, but > it is just a few. Many of my students are taking the format > and doing multiparagraph writing and I am just happy. > > Ralph Fletcher said if you don't teach writing daily, you > might as well not teach writing. I am seeing the results of > this. My students are not only writing better mechanically, > their content is improving. >
On 9/14/11, Kristina wrote: > On 6/11/11, VET wrote: >> This is an OLD one about a college professor. >> >> For his final exam, he had one word written at the top of >> the exam papers, "Why?". >> >> Some wrote for hours, but the student who wrote, "Because" >> got the A. >> >> The B went to the student who wrote, "Why not?". >> >> I used this story to try to prepare my students for some of >> the "unique" professors they might have in > college/university. > > > This is great!! I would use this at the begining of the year > as a way to get students to think about why they are not just > in an English class, but why they are in school in general. > They could then tell me in their writing what they expect to > learn while in my class. It would be fun to then give them the > same "quiz" at the end of the year as a reflective piece > demonstrating what they have learned on a broad scale.
The way I heard this story was that the A went to those who wrote 'Why not?' and the B went to those who wrote 'Because'.
I'm not at all sure I'd give a passing grade at all to 'because' - unless they put ... behind it.
> > Nave a great school year! > > > On 9/14/11, Kristina wrote: >> On 6/11/11, VET wrote: >>> This is an OLD one about a college professor. >>> >>> For his final exam, he had one word written at the top of >>> the exam papers, "Why?". >>> >>> Some wrote for hours, but the student who wrote, "Because" >>> got the A. >>> >>> The B went to the student who wrote, "Why not?". >>> >>> I used this story to try to prepare my students for some of >>> the "unique" professors they might have in >> college/university. >> >> >> This is great!! I would use this at the begining of the year >> as a way to get students to think about why they are not just >> in an English class, but why they are in school in general. >> They could then tell me in their writing what they expect to >> learn while in my class. It would be fun to then give them the >> same "quiz" at the end of the year as a reflective piece >> demonstrating what they have learned on a broad scale.
Put folded pieces of paper with different numbers written on them in a container. Usually, the numbers are consecutive and can start with 5, 10, 15 depending on the age/grade of the student.
Have the students give words that are written on folded pieces of paper and put in a different container.
Then, the students pick a number and a word from the containers.
Ex., the word "flower" has to be the 12th word in a sentence.
Someone will write about 10 very's, just wait and see.
I always praised that person for thinking so creatively and gave him/her a Jolly Rancher(Not acceptable in some places now, I know) of his/her choice.
Then, I explained that the repeated word thing had already been done and no repeats were needed or warranted. We had gotten it. Anything beyond two of the same repeated words would not be acceptable.
That is when directions would change to "flower cannot be the last word in the sentence and no word is to be repeated unnecessarily".
I have even written a book called "What If..." to help students with ideas for writing. This is, imho, one of the most important skills b/c the kids learn how to think through a scenario completely - not just talk and test. Besides, it gives me ideas to integrate into my social studies class.
In this they can tell the inventors how much their invention had improved/changed society.
The ones to living inventors were mailed to them, after we researched their addresses.
On 6/11/11, Margaret Dacko wrote: > In science class I have students use creat...See More