If you are struggling to pass this test, I recommend looking at "learning liaison" videos on YouTube. They helped tremendously and are probably why I passed. Follow their method; it works like a charm.
-Start with your opening sentence to draw attention to the prompt - In this day and age a healthy lifestyle is essential to not only physical wellness, but mental wellness too.
- Next, work your prompt in - Due to the increased emphasis on healthy living, it is expected that healthy eating habits and proper nutrition is an important factor in school lunches. Food is fuel and nothing fuels a growing body better than eating a good variety of fruits, vegetable and protein.
Thesis - While there are many advantages to healthy school lunches such as improved behavior, there are also disadvantages like an increase in cost to consider.
2nd paragraph - focus on your one advantage you stated. MAKE UP A STATISTIC TO SUPPORT IT!! Talk about one or two ways that nutritious food can improve behavior and back it up! It is ok that it is made up, be generic. They understand you have 50 mins to write. A 2001 survey from the University of Michigan states that 73% of educators noticed an increase in positive behavior after students consumed a lunch consisting of fresh fruits, vegetable and lean protein.
3rd paragraph - focus on your one disadvantage - List reasons why cost would be a disadvantage . MAKE UP A STATISTIC TO SUPORT IT!! A 2021 survey of New York school districts found that 66% of the districts did not have the budget to support the cost of purchasing and preparing fresh foods.
Last paragraph - Close up your topics. Restate your thesis
I hope this helps! You don't need to have the standard 5 paragraph essay or you don't have to have several reasons per advantage or disadvantage. you can, but not necessary. Vary your words for advantage or disadvantage: pro, con; positive aspect, negative aspect, etc. Above all, stay on focus! Spell correctly, use proper grammar.
I was able to pass first try last month. Hope this helps some and good luck to you all!
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TashaI also took mine today in Brevard co. It was advantages and disadvantages of requiring public speaking in college. Best luck on passing Enmaai! I know Ill impatiently wait all month for mine lol
I just took my GK essay test in Miami (on June, 21), and the prompt was about the advantages and disadvantages of public speaking courses in colleges and universities.
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Benefits- Setting a good example to the students, improved attendance for staff, and motivated school staff.
Challenges- Lack of funding for public health initiatives in education, lack of space: some programs require dedicated space to carry out program activities which cost continuous money. Also, you can't force employees to follow health initiatives during their personal lives. It is a commitment that must be done outside of school as well.
I also added fake statistics for the benefits and challenges to back it up. I just hope I wrote enough!