Hello everyone, any suggestions on how to format the essay? I continue receive a score of 6. I am not sure why. I take the exam Friday morning. I will post the essay topic Friday afternoon. Carolinafernandez326@aol.com Thank you all. Good luck to everyone!
(Paragraph 1) My intro was literally the topic they gave me and then I wrote.... There are many advantages and disadvantages to healthy food choices and cooking practices in schools.
(Paragraph 2)There are many advantages to healthy food choices and cooking practices........I listed all my advantages with EVIDENCE for each one.
(Paragraph 3) There are many disadvantages....then I listed them all and showed my EVIDENCE which included a stat (19% of children 6-11 are obese in schools today)
(Paragraph 4) Conclusion. I literally restated my thesis then did a call to action (Parents students and teachers must come up with a more cost efficient and effective way to reduce obesity in children today)
Biggest thing is GRAMMAR and STRUCTURE! You will get marked off for misspelled words so make sure to leave 5 minutes to proof your essay. I only had 4 total paragraphs so 5 is not necessary.
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A friend took it today and had Advantages and Disadvantages of healthier food and cooking practices being implemented in school to help reduce the occurrence of obesity.
(Paragraph 1) My intro was literally the topic they gave me and then I wrote.... There are many advantages and disadvantages to healthy food choices and cooking practices in schools.
(Paragraph 2)There are many advantages to healthy food choices and cooking pract...See More