• The dog (subject) bit ...See MoreIf there is one step you can take to give your writing for students more impact, it is this: in 95% of cases, use the active voice.
The active voice uses the following sentence structure: subject, verb, object. When you reverse this order—object, verb, subject—you have the passive voice. For example:
• The dog (subject) bit (verb) the man (object). (This is the active voice.)
• The man (object) was bitten (verb) by the dog (subject). (This is the passive voice.)
To complicate matters, there is a second form of the passive voice in which the subject is not mentioned at all. Using that technique I have become one of the best writers on https://essaywriterservices.net/ , they have their raitings there. For example,
• Your application (object) has been turned down (verb).
Notice, the subject is missing, so we don't know who did the turning down. This is called the divine passive. Writers often use the divine passive as a way to avoid responsibility for their statements. Things are just mysteriously done, while nobody actually does them! Overuse of this form suggests evasion.
The most obvious result of overuse of the passive voice, however, is that it slows down the 'voice' of the material, giving it a stilted, unnatural feeling. The order of the words in an active voice sentence is the normal form of expression in English, and the passive voice is really speaking backwards. After a while, this becomes irritating to readers, and might well make them react unfavourably to your message—exactly the opposite of what you want. Take a look at a long letter or memo which you found particularly tedious to read, and you will probably find it is bogged down in passive voice sentences.
This should be a major focus when you begin editing your writing. Each time you see the passive, try reversing it to make the active voice. You'll find it makes your writing more vigorous, powerful and reader-friendly.
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I have been planning to do this for a year, and just keeping planning it all in my head. I am supper excited to do this. I have been researching for a few months now. I have not found much information of value for opening one for a special needs children. I have only found one other special needs daycare in the untied states. I found it once and i could not find again online. I had an internship all summer at a special needs school, and i LOVED it. I am in the process of applying for a private grant. I have written a mission statement. Its been driving me crazy not being able to find anything. If any one has information that would be of help I would GREATLY APPRECIATE it!!!!!!!
I teach middle school math and I have many special needs students; we have a few laptops but no way near enough. Can anyone suggest a sponsor ? We only need 5 or six computers. thanks, thomas.
On 6/13/10, Sandi wrote: > On 6/07/10, Lyn Murray wrote: >> Hi!! I am a Licensed Master Social Worker, who specializes >> with Special Needs Children. I am also a previous Group >> Home Daycare owner. I am very interested in opening a >> daycare that speiclizes in special needs children. I am >> looking to open a center, but have no idea where to start >> my search. I have a business plan in my head but have >> nothing documented yet. Where do I start? > > > Hi Lyn, > > Opening a special needs daycare is a great idea. I know there > is an incredible need for quality care for this population. > The first place you need to start is to contact your state > Department of Social Services who, as far as I know, monitors > daycares in most states. They will give you their guidelines > regarding licensing compliance including staff to student > ratios, physical set up, staff qualifications, etc. Develop a > website and what really helped the daycare that I direct - be > willing to accept kids on a part time basis, for part time > pay. Most daycares will let kids come 2 or 3 days a week but > they expect parents to pay for the entire week. Some parents > don't need that amount of time. Offering part time saved our > daycare from an early demise within the first 3 months. And, > most importantly, be patient... it takes time to get things > going, to find the right staff, and to get the word out and > build your program. Your best referrals will be from > satisfied parents. We have been open since Sept. 2007 and are > now serving 68 infants through elementary students. Our > growth has been because of lots of prayers (we are church- > based, and word of mouth referrals from parents - even after > their kids move on to school! Good luck. Running a daycare > has it's challenges but they are never more than the rewards!
DLKHi Lyn, I only found you because I was asking the exact same question, but it seems all you got in return were more stories. Have you found what you needed? In what state/town are located?
my teacher mrs.sheard is very rude to me I'm sorry I know this messege is only supposed to be about writing and subjects I'm just typing on here letting you kmow don't put your students down let them have time leave them alone and just let them be kids because you never get another chance to be a kid so choose your life and choices wisely
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